Inuyasha (poem)


I'm not the man of my past,
i've changed, broken the cast.
You have set me free,
released from fate's tree.

Unbound by hands of time,
we dance a pantomime.
Command sit, I will obey -
from your side I won't stray.

Myself a fractional demon,
In a world uncommon,
I'll save you though the years,
Just so long as you stroke my ears.

Posted By Mike On Tuesday, August 23, 2005
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manuela - Friday, January 12, 2007 1:12:49 AM


Kayla - Saturday, January 20, 2007 3:46:14 AM

I really like it. You did a great job. Keep up the good work!!!!

Heather - Wednesday, January 24, 2007 2:54:59 AM

It great. I can even sing it too.
Job well done!!!!!!

stupidkid - Wednesday, January 31, 2007 11:55:06 PM

dat waz tight

punkgaopher - Tuesday, February 13, 2007 12:19:54 AM

good poem! even though kagome sucks inuyasha rules!!! muhahahaha!!!! go inuyasha!!

scorm - Saturday, February 17, 2007 5:38:59 AM

i hate ppl who love kikyo!!! u suck person who likes kikyo how could u shes the one who killed inuyasha in the 1st place... kagome rules inuyasha likes her better then that pitty party kikyo

Ashley - Friday, March 09, 2007 8:52:10 PM

Nice poem i enjoyed it

dana - Tuesday, April 24, 2007 5:33:19 PM

it was really good i liked it

Briana - Tuesday, May 08, 2007 12:32:56 AM

kagome doesn't suck kikyo does

kim - Monday, May 14, 2007 5:33:57 PM

the poem rules

josh - Wednesday, May 23, 2007 5:56:52 PM

thats peom was awsome i just loved it and anyone that hates it hates the show and those that hate the show hate the world and they suck!

josh - Thursday, May 24, 2007 5:51:45 PM

hi me agian like i siad this poem was awsome!!!!!

mary - Tuesday, June 12, 2007 1:30:14 AM

that was a great poem it was sweet i liked it kogme and inuyasha 4 ever

half-breed robin - Wednesday, September 05, 2007 6:36:20 PM

i hate ppl who love kagome she needs 2 be sllater by inuyasha in his full-demon form or something.
inuyasha dezarbs 2 be with kikyo not (k a g o m e)that damn bit*# needs 2 die die die die die die die die die die die die die die okay do ya all get it know

josh - Thursday, September 27, 2007 5:47:24 PM

Its been a year and im back baby good peom for the 3rd time mwahahaha!

liz - Monday, October 08, 2007 3:18:23 PM


liz - Monday, October 08, 2007 3:20:04 PM

kagome is the best ever,

akilah - Sunday, November 18, 2007 9:21:03 PM

i'm going to go with kagome kikoy scuks! inuyasha and kagome forevr by the way I hate you kikoy lovers!!!!!!!!!

MICHEL - Sunday, December 02, 2007 9:39:40 PM

you can do veter than that;FUCK TO EVERYONE WHO HATES KAGOME

Emily - Monday, December 31, 2007 12:33:11 PM

Well i loved it and Kagome is the best! i dont see how all u sluts and whores[thats right im callin u sluts and whores cuz thats wut Kikyo is]like her shes dead! and Kagome is alive! and if i was InuYasha i woodnt even touch Kikyo that wood just make me sick! shes like an effin zombie! thats just nasty!!Welp u heard wut i had to say!! so haha peace out bitches!!

unitle - Tuesday, January 08, 2008 6:46:59 PM

your moms stupid and kagome hot!!!!!!!!!

unitle - Tuesday, January 08, 2008 6:48:08 PM

ya your all sluts and bitchs

brittany - Thursday, January 10, 2008 10:24:12 PM

inuyasha is cool whi ever hate it they are guy.

Bitch - Friday, February 08, 2008 2:07:49 PM

your all bitchs

Unitle23 - Friday, February 08, 2008 2:08:53 PM

you mother fuckers using my name die

Unitle23 - Friday, February 08, 2008 2:11:33 PM

Kagome rules shes hot and so is sango

Gavin - Thursday, May 01, 2008 1:18:59 AM

too bad the anime is uncontinued, i'm too lazy to read manga (dunno which manga that last ep was) but im really wondering if Inuyasha chooses kagome or kikyo. this is a frekin wonderfully scary love story rumiko takahasshi has set up.

taylor - Friday, June 20, 2008 2:52:28 AM

totaly asome just what i was hoping for

NARAKU LOVER NB.1 - Wednesday, July 30, 2008 3:04:37 PM


Inu-Yasha - Wednesday, January 28, 2009 4:55:13 PM

Well actually i enjoy both Kikyo and Kagome and see no reason to hate one or the other and if u have aprob let me know explain to me y either is better than the other here my email ( go ahead i check everyday so go ahead. p.s. which ever comes up with best reason i'll make a video and post it on youtube promis again it is either kikyo or kagome is better than the other or thir both great.
p.s.s I luv the poem

InuYasha09 - Monday, March 02, 2009 2:33:02 PM

this was an awesome poem dude i totally loved it! ^_^

Demon_Sesshomaru - Monday, March 02, 2009 2:35:49 PM

it was awesome i guess.......humph but still need a lil push...but nice work....there.

inuyashalover - Friday, September 11, 2009 1:56:38 PM

i think its amazing
i loved it
and saved it on my computer
and i love inuyasha

Annie_inuyasha - Wednesday, March 31, 2010 8:46:40 PM

Fuck u all, kikyo lovers! Kagome n inuyahsa ends up together anyway and fuck kikyo!!!!! Kagome rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Uh huh, im a bitch. N Sesshomaru is awsome by the way!

Ash - Saturday, March 26, 2011 5:07:58 AM

i loooove kagome. If you don't like kagome, you can go jump in a lagoon for all i care. PS. i loved the poem tooo. :-)

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Michael C. Neel, born 1976 in Houston, TX and now live in Knoxvile, TN. Software developer, currently .Net focused. Board member of ETNUG and organizes CodeStock, East Tennessee's annual developers conference. .Net speaker, a Microsoft ASP.NET MVP and ASPInsider. Co-Founder of FuncWorks, LLC and GameMarx.

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